A bit repetative.

Hihat pattern isnt very exciting. Try to vary the hits a bit, decay and volume.

Drums has some punch but could defenently be more drum n bassy, some ghost hits to bring more groove. A bit later there are some parts with more hits in them but IMO they lack that DnB groove that makes it DnB.

Synth doesnt catch me. Needs something else to be main thing in song.

Needs better intro, try some ambient sounds, pads etc. Keep it a bit distinct from rest of track yet in same vibe.

Overall I want a more fullish track. I get the impression there is something missing. More groove, more intresting parts. Defenently needs more -viby- sounds setting the mood.

Mixing was ok. I think headphones are enough to make an ok mix. I never used anything else then headphones while mixing and it worked nice for me. And I bought them for 50$ or something so they arent -that- expensive and they certainly arent made for mixing music but they work fine anyway.

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